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I don\'t like the environment that temperature gap is big for a year.
If I could live in another country, I\'like to live the Mediterranean area.
Particuarly I am getting older, I don\'t like capricious seasonal difference in Korea.
강사 첨삭
Ms. [이름]!
Thank you for this. It\'s the same in my city. Most people that I know, move to a warmer place when they get older, that is also the advice of doctors to our relatives. Well, I guess we just need to do whatever will make us comfortable.
Aki~
I don\'t like the environment that temperature gap is big for a year.
>>> I don\'t like the environment the temperature gap is big for a year.
If I could live in another country, I\'like to live the Mediterranean area.
>>> If I could live in another country, I like to live in the Mediterranean area.
Particuarly I am getting older, I don\'t like capricious seasonal difference in Korea.
>>> Particularly I am getting older, and I don\'t like capricious seasonal differences in Korea.
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