Seasons!

Spring-THe season of Spring is veyr beacutiful season. Because most of flowers are bloom in Spring and each flower has beautiful color. Theat's why I love Spring. Also,Spring is warm and sweet,in my cases.and all of koreans thinking same me too. Summer-Summer is hot but,we can eat ice-cream and water mellon amd we cam gp to the swimming pool and the beach!What a good! So I love Summer more than Spring,Fall and Winter. Fall-Fall is warm like a Spring but Fall and Spring are different. Spring is warm and sweet.but,Fall is warm and cool. Winter-Winter is cold.very cold.but we can do lots of things,like snow ball fight,make a snowman,go ski and play any thing in the snow. What a great season Winter. But these season is very cold.so we could catch a cold.like a very bad cold. This is the four seasons. They are gives many lots of things and helps. But,they also gives bad things. Example-havey rain,sea wave and tpyhoon.and others. Teacher what do you like most Seasons? Tell me about it. Next class and interesting movie. Teacher I think the seasons are very interesting.<-->.

Hello Justin! Wow. What a wonderful and long composition you have here! I had fun reading it. ^^ You are very creative  but I noticed you made lots of mistakes when it comes to proper capitalization, spacing, spelling and punctuation. These are important in writing so please take note of that.   We only have rainy and dry seasons in the Philippines and I don\'t like either of them. I like it when it\'s not too hot but not too cold either. Somewhere in between. ^^ Have a great day! Ciao! ~Teacher Marie~ Spring-THe season of Spring is veyr beacutiful season. >> Spring - this season is very beautiful.Because most of flowers are bloom in Spring and each flower has beautiful color. >> Because most flowers are in bloom during spring and each flower has a beautiful color.Theat\'s why I love Spring. >> That\'s why I love spring.Also,Spring is warm and sweet,in my cases. >> Spring is also warm and sweet, in my opinion. and all of koreans thinking same me too. >> All Koreans think the same way too.Summer-Summer is hot but,we can eat ice-cream and water mellon amd we cam gp to the swimming pool and the beach! >> Summer is hot but we can eat ice cream and watermelon during this season. Furthermore, we can also go to the swimming pool or the beach. What a good! >> What a good season!So I love Summer more than Spring,Fall and Winter. >> So I love summer more than spring, fall and winter.Fall-Fall is warm like a Spring but Fall and Spring are different. >> Fall is warm like spring, but they are not exactly the same.Spring is warm and sweet.>> correct but,Fall is warm and cool. >> But fall is warm and cool.Winter-Winter is cold.very cold.>> Winter is not just cold, it is extremely cold. but we can do lots of things,like snow ball fight,make a snowman,go ski and play any thing in the snow. >> But we can do lots of things like snowball fighting, making snowman, skiing and playing in the snow. What a great season Winter. >> What a great season winter is!But these season is very cold.so we could catch a cold.like a very bad cold. >> But since this is a cold season, we could catch a very bad cold too.This is the four seasons. >> These are the four seasons.They are gives many lots of things and helps. >> They give us many things and helps us a lot too.But,they also gives bad things. >> But they also have some bad sides.Example-havey rain,sea wave and tpyhoon.and others. >> For example, heavy rain, sea waves, typhoon, etc.Teacher what do you like most Seasons? >> Teacher, what season do you like the most?Tell me about it. Next class and interesting movie >> Tell me about it next class and tell me about the interesting movie that you will watch too.Teacher I think the seasons are very interesting.<-->. >> correct OR >> Teacher, I think the four seasons are very interesting.