Second Composition
학생이 쓴 원문
I couldn't have a lesson yesterday. Teacher asked me what was happend, and I said I've had a cold but it was exactly not. I was supposted to say this but I didn't remember how should I say it in english.LOL
Ofcourse I was sick, but It was because of anxious cares about my future, not a cold.
In fack, last week, I had a jop interview and I thought I'll be passed but yesterday, I got a rejection letter. :(
Many people say I look like a flight attendant. Even customer of store where I work also say like that. I don't know what's the matter with me. It makes me really ANNOYING!
강사 첨삭
Hello there [이름]!
I know how you feel. I really do because I also experienced being rejected before.
Anyway, that will pass. Just think that there are lot of better jobs waiting for you.
You\'re rejected today probably because that is not the right one for you. Don\'t lose you hope and keep on trying.
Try to relax this weekend, okay?
~Teacher Shanee
I couldn\'t have a lesson yesterday.
>>Correct!
>>Or: I couldn\'t have the class yesterday.
Teacher asked me what was happend, and I said I\'ve had a cold but it was exactly not.
>>Teaccher asked me what has happened, and I said I\'ve had a cold. However, that was not the exact reason.
I was supposted to say this but I didn\'t remember how should I say it in english.LOL
>>Correct! (Capitalize the beginning of English)
Ofcourse I was sick, but It was because of anxious cares about my future, not a cold.
>>Of course I was sick, but it\'s not a cold. It was just because I care too much about my future that I got anxious.In fack, last week, I had a jop interview and I thought I\'ll be passed but yesterday, I got a rejection letter. :(
>>In fact last week, I had a job interview and I thought I\'ll pass it. However yesterday, I got a rejection letter. :(Many people say I look like a flight attendant.
>>Correct!
Even customer of store where I work also say like that.
>>Even the costumers in the store where I work also said that.
I don\'t know what\'s the matter with me.
>>Correct!
It makes me really ANNOYING!
>>It makes me really annoyed!
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