Second compostion 2; Comparing two items

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First, I will talk about the electric consumption.

>> First, I  will talk about electric consumptions.

Assuming the two types of lamps have same brightness, the consumption of LED lamps is about five times less than Fluorescent lamps.

>>  Assuming the two types of lamp have the same brightness, the consumption of LED lamps is about five times lesser than Fluorescent lamps.

Because the consumption is directly proportional to the electric bill, if we use LED lamps, then we can save our five times money.

>> Because the consumption is directly proportional to the electric bill, if we use LED lamps, then we can save our money five times .   

Next, I’m going to tell you about their lifespan.

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The lifespan of fluorescent lamps like those (pointing the lamps of ceiling) is 10,000 hours.

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It’s about 3 years if we use it 10 hours a day. On the contrary, LED lamps can last 60,000 hours.

>>  It\'s equivalent to 3 years if we use it for 10 hours a day. On the contrary, LED lamps can last for 60,000 hours.

Yes LED lamps have six times more lifespan than fluorescent lamps.

>>  Yes LED lamps lifespan is six times longer than fluorescent lamps.

Until now, we can see LED lamps are still better than fluorescent lamps.

>> Now, we can say that LED lamps are far better than  fluorescent lamps.

Nevertheless we still use more fluorescent lamps.

>> Nevertheless most of us still use fluorescent lamps.

The answer is in next. Let’s see.

>> The answer is on the next composition. Let\'s see.