second epi.

2014-01-23 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

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Three years ago, I had two jobs. At that time, I was working about for 14 hours a day, earning a lot of money and she quit her job and had relax time. So when I met her, I paid money more than her. I didn’t care about that although she didn’t look satisfied with my favor. Frankly, she looked like that she wanted me to pay all the things. But I was not. After few months, she got a job and I knew she got first salary. One day, we was supposed to meet and have lunch. Before meeting, she phoned me and told that she could not meet me because she didn’t have money. To tell the truth, I didn’t understand her and I was irritated. But I told her that we would eat not that expensive food. But after all, she canceled our promise. I didn’t understand at all, but I didn’t want to pay all things for her. So I just said ‘yes’ In fact, It was not a big deal at all. In these kind of situations, of course I am willing to pay for someone. But I thought that she had some kind of habit. I hate it. In korea, we call it beggar’s habit. There is a following story about her. I think we can talk about that during our class.

강사 첨삭

Hi there, Ms. [이름]!

Thank you for your composition. I am looking forward to speaking with you because I am really curious about the next story you\'re going to share with me today. I know it\'s interesting and that really thrills me. Take care and talk to you in class!

T. JanE ^^

Three years ago, I had two jobs.

>> Correct

At that time, I was working about for 14 hours a day, earning a lot of money and she quit her job and had relax time.

>> At that time, I worked for about 14 hours a day, and earned a lot of money, while she quit her job and had a relaxing time.

So when I met her, I paid money more than her.

>> So when I met her, I paid more than she did.

I didn’t care about that although she didn’t look satisfied with my favor.

>> I didn\'t care about that, however, she didn\'t look satisfied with that kind of favor.

Frankly, she looked like that she wanted me to pay all the things.

>> Frankly, it seemed that she wanted me to pay for everything.

But I was not.

>> But I didn\'t.

After few months, she got a job and I knew she got first salary.

>> After few months, she got a job and I knew she got her salary.

One day, we was supposed to meet and have lunch.

>> One day, we were supposed to meet and have lunch.

Before meeting, she phoned me and told that she could not meet me because she didn’t have money.

>> Before our scheduled meeting, she phoned to tell me we couldn\'t meet because she didn\'t have money.

To tell the truth, I didn’t understand her and I was irritated.

>> Correct

But I told her that we would eat not that expensive food.

>> But I told her we would not eat something expensive.

But after all, she canceled our promise.

>> But after all, she still canceled our appointment.

I didn’t understand at all, but I didn’t want to pay all things for her.

>> Correct

So I just said ‘yes’

>> Correct

In fact, it was not a big deal at all.

>> Correct

In these kind of situations, of course I am willing to pay for someone.

>> In this kind of situation, of course I am willing to pay for someone.

But I thought that she had some kind of habit.

>> Correct

I hate it.

>> Correct

In Korea, we call it beggar’s habit.

>> Correct

There is a following story about her.

>> There is another story about her.

I think we can talk about that during our class.

>> Correct

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