Second homework
학생이 쓴 원문
I have some ways to make good friends.
I tend to be honest to my friends.
If you lie to your friends, you will lose trust in each other.
I think faith is important between friends, so I try to be honest.
Second, I try to understand and respect the difference between friends and me.
It is also important to think about and respect each other because each person has different thoughts.
I think we can be good friends if we talk about differences and acknowledge each other.
Lastly, I express a lot to my friends.
When a friend is having a hard time, he or she gives words of comfort and support.
When a friend comes up with something good, praise him or be happy together.
These actions and words make me and my friend closer.
강사 첨삭
Happy Monday, Hazel! ^^
Good job on this composition, there were no errors found in your sentences. ^^
Keep it up!
Good job on this composition, there were no errors found in your sentences. ^^
Keep it up!
- T. Rina
1. I have some ways to make good friends.
>> CORRECT!
2. I tend to be honest to my friends.
>> CORRECT!
2. I tend to be honest to my friends.
>> CORRECT!
3. If you lie to your friends, you will lose trust in each other.
>> CORRECT!
4. I think faith is important between friends, so I try to be honest.
>> CORRECT!
5. Second, I try to understand and respect the difference between friends and me.
5. Second, I try to understand and respect the difference between friends and me.
>> CORRECT!
6. It is also important to think about and respect each other because each person has different thoughts.
>> CORRECT!
7. I think we can be good friends if we talk about differences and acknowledge each other.
>> CORRECT!
8. Lastly, I express a lot to my friends.
>> CORRECT!
9. When a friend is having a hard time, he or she gives words of comfort and support.
>> CORRECT!
10. When a friend comes up with something good, praise him or be happy together.
>> CORRECT!
11. These actions and words make me and my friend closer.
>> CORRECT!
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