Second homework

2022-03-14 · 첨삭 강사 Rina

학생이 쓴 원문

I have some ways to make good friends. I tend to be honest to my friends. If you lie to your friends, you will lose trust in each other. I think faith is important between friends, so I try to be honest. Second, I try to understand and respect the difference between friends and me. It is also important to think about and respect each other because each person has different thoughts. I think we can be good friends if we talk about differences and acknowledge each other. Lastly, I express a lot to my friends. When a friend is having a hard time, he or she gives words of comfort and support. When a friend comes up with something good, praise him or be happy together. These actions and words make me and my friend closer.

강사 첨삭

Happy Monday, Hazel! ^^
Good job on this composition, there were no errors found in your sentences. ^^
Keep it up!

- T. Rina


1. I have some ways to make good friends.
>> CORRECT!

2. I tend to be honest to my friends.
>> CORRECT!

3. If you lie to your friends, you will lose trust in each other.
>> CORRECT!

4. I think faith is important between friends, so I try to be honest.
>> CORRECT!

5. Second, I try to understand and respect the difference between friends and me.
>> CORRECT!

6. It is also important to think about and respect each other because each person has different thoughts.
>> CORRECT!

7. I think we can be good friends if we talk about differences and acknowledge each other.
>> CORRECT!

8. Lastly, I express a lot to my friends.
>> CORRECT!

9. When a friend is having a hard time, he or she gives words of comfort and support.
>> CORRECT!

10. When a friend comes up with something good, praise him or be happy together.
>> CORRECT!

11. These actions and words make me and my friend closer.
>> CORRECT!

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