second homework
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Actually, I can speak only two, Korean and English. So, English is the hardest of two. Because English requires a lot of concentration when I try to communicate to understand context. That\'s why I get so tired to speak English. Sometimes, I feel more comfortable using body language than speaking English.
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Actually, I can speak only two, Korean and English.
>> Actually, I can only speak Korean and English.
So, English is the hardest of two.
>> For me, English is the hardest of the two.
Because English requires a lot of concentration when I try to communicate to understand context.
>> Because English requires a lot concentration to focus on understanding context when I try to communicate in English.
That\'s why I get so tired to speak English.
>> That\'s why I get so tired of speaking English.
Sometimes, I feel more comfortable using body language than speaking English.
>> Correct
OR
>> Sometimes, I feel more at ease communicating through gestures than speaking in English.
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