Second homework~

This is my second homework! This is about advantage of cellphone. First, we can use it for an emergency. If we are in crisis, we can call to family or 911. And it makes easy to make an appointment or cancel that. And also we can get in touch with a friend leaving far away. I think cellphone is really neccessary because it has a lots of advantage!

Hello [이름], You are exceptional student. I'm happy that you aways do your homework. Keep it up! see you later.. Teacher Verna   This is my second homework! >>Correct^^This is about advantage of cellphone. >> Correct^^ >> This is about the advantages of using cell phone. (>>better)First, we can use it for an emergency. >>First, we can use it for emergency.If we are in crisis, we can call to family or 911. >>If we are in crisis, we can call our family or 911.And it makes easy to make an appointment or cancel that. >>And it's easy to make  or cancel an appointment .And also we can get in touch with a friend leaving far away. >>And also we can get in touch with a friend who lives far away.I think cellphone is really neccessary because it has a lots of advantage! >>I think cellphone is really neccessary because it has a lot of advantages!