Second homework

2018-05-31 · 첨삭 강사 Elisha

학생이 쓴 원문

I have two ways to deal with my stress. first, i talk my story to my friends or boyfriend. They hear it carefully and sometimes even give advices to me. Second way is crying alone. It make my mood better. In this way, my stress fades away.

강사 첨삭

Hello, [이름]! Happy Thursday!

You are a very smart woman, not a lot of people can handle stress the way that you do.

Thank you for sending me your homework! You did great here.

Take care on your way to work, don\'t forget to bring water with you! ~Teacher Elisha

I have two ways to deal with my stress.

>> CORRECT!
first, i talk my story to my friends or boyfriend.

>> First, I tell my story to my friends or to my boyfriend.
They hear it carefully and sometimes even give advices to me.

>> They listen to it carefully and sometimes they even give me advices.
Second way is crying alone.

>> My second way is to cry alone.
It make my mood better.

>> It makes my mood better.
In this way, my stress fades away.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> By doing this, my stress fades away.

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