second letter
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi!
You did a good job in writing this composition. I noticed a few mistakes particularly regarding your capitalization and punctuation marks. Have a nice day!
T. Joanna
i had a very important presentation today.
>> I had a very important presentation today.
everyone who participated in seminar said that our team will win.
>> Everyone who participated in the seminar said that our team will win.
but our team didn't get a first prize.
>> But our team didn't get the first prize.
and we get a third prize.
>> And we got the third prize.
so i felt disappointed.
>> So, i felt disappointed.
and the atfernoon, i checked the toeic grade.
>> And in the atfernoon, i checked the toeic grade.
i got a bad grade.:(
>> I got a bad grade.:(
actually, i really want to go to bed now, but i can't do that..
>> Actually, I really want to go to bed now, but I can't do that.
i will listen to english radio:)
>> I will listen to english radio:)
next time, i will get a high grade of toeic.
>> Next time, I will get a high grade in toeic.
see ya!
>>See you!
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