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In particular, people who read a variety of books are usually more creative than those who did not when doing some important task.
For example, a recent study held in Korea has shown that when most students who had great scores in LGC, which is an examination to evaluate one’s creativity, were asked, they said the reason is a variety of reading during their childhood
Thaks a lot for your help and hope your are in good health
See you on Thuresday
Take care
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Hi there [이름]!
You are doing great in our class so keep up the good work ok? Stay cool!
Monica
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>>>continuation from the previous page.In particular, people who read a variety of books are usually more creative than those who did not when doing some important task.>>>correctFor example, a recent study held in Korea has shown that when most students who had great scores in LGC, which is an examination to evaluate one’s creativity, were asked, they said the reason is a variety of reading during their childhood>>>correctThaks a lot for your help and hope your are in good health
>>>Thanks a lot for your help and hope you are in good health.See you on Thuresday
>>>See you on Thursday/See you tomorrow.Take care
>>>correct
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