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2011-03-24 · 첨삭 강사 Joanna

학생이 쓴 원문

that time, my focus was to my professor. and i didn't realize he did that. suddenly he give me a phone and the phone is out of order. i tried to find a solution, but it's not easy. and yesterday, i can't study anymore because of the phone. -------------------------------- my feel is better after your call. i know the super lucky will come to me. and the lucky tests me. i change my think way. because what i think is what i undergo. i really appreciate your kindless and your concern. although i didn't meet you only once, i really like you. and i trust you :) maybe today is lucky day for me and you. have a nice day~ bye:)

강사 첨삭

that time, my focus was to my professor. and i didn't realize he did that. >>At that time, my attention is on my professor and I didn’t notice what he was doing to my phone. suddenly he give me a phone and the phone is out of order. >>Suddenly, he handed me the phone and to my surprise my phone was out of service. i tried to find a solution, but it's not easy. and yesterday, i can't study anymore because of the phone. >>I tried to look for a solution to fix it but it’s not easy. I couldn’t take back my focus in the lecture because of the phone. my feel is better after your call. >>I felt better after talking with you, though. i know the super lucky will come to me. and the lucky tests me. >>I know the “big luck” is coming to me and these are all challenges. i change my think way. because what i think is what i undergo. >>I changed the way I think. Because I found out that what I think happens in reality. i really appreciate your kindless and your concern. >>I really appreciate your kindness and concern. although i didn't meet you only once, i really like you. and i trust you :) >>Though I don’t see you even for once, I really like and trust you. maybe today is lucky day for me and you. >>Today may be a lucky day for me and you. have a nice day~ bye:) >>Have a nice day! Bye!   Yes, [이름]! Today, tomorrow and the coming days will be lucky for us. Just think positively and don’t waste your time thinking about negative things. Those negative stuffs will just destroy you. Have fun! But take extra careful. I’ll call you tomorrow again.

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