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An upcoming wave of biotechnology treatments is making the whole process of delivering drugs into the human body much more convenient. The most popular method that have hit the market already is a needle free injection of solutions, which involves placing drugs or vaccine capsules under the skin. Another treatment method being tested uses genetically engineered bacteria that secrete therapeutic proteins or vaccines while living harmlessly inside your body. And soon it may be possible to perfect inhaled deliver of biological molecules such as insulin, which currently require painful daily injections.
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An upcoming wave of biotechnology treatments is making the whole process of delivering drugs into the human body much more convenient.
>> Correct!
The most popular method that have hit the market already is a needle free injection of solutions, which involves placing drugs or vaccine capsules under the skin.
>> The most popular method that hit the market already is a needle free injection of solutions, which involves placing drugs or vaccine capsules under the skin.
Another treatment method being tested uses genetically engineered bacteria that secret therapeutic proteins or vaccines while living harmlessly inside your body.
>> Correct!
And soon it may be possible to perfect inhaled deliver of biological molecules such as insulin, which currently require painful daily injections.
>> And soon it may be possible to perfect inhaled deliver of biological molecules such as insulin, which currently require painful injections daily.
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