Securitly and Naturally...
학생이 쓴 원문
hi, connie
I will explain about yesterday's words.
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Some men go to a racing car and there is an electronic display facility there and they take pictures.
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Some men go to the Racing Car Exhibition when they need a beautiful woman's picture. Because, The exhibition has a many car with racing models. also, they naturally take a picture about the Racing Models instead of the Cars. indeed, they don't need a Cars's Pictures. Actually, they need a Models Pictures.
Securitly and Naturally...
but I am not. I don't go exhibition. and I also can't take a picture. I live just countryside. so, I take a scenary.
I expect our today class,
see you,
강사 첨삭
Hi Min,
Wow, thank you for your explanation now I understand what you mean, so men don’t really go there to watch the race but to take model’s picture- very clever haha. I love taking pictures too; I love nature like sunset, ocean, stones, rivers etc. See you in class. I’m sure you are very busy.
Stay safe,
T.connie
Some men go to the Racing Car Exhibition when they need a beautiful woman's picture. Because, The exhibition has a many car with racing models. also, they naturally take a picture about the Racing Models instead of the Cars. indeed, they don't need a Cars's Pictures. Actually, they need a Models Pictures. Securitly and Naturally...
>> Some men go to the Racing Car Exhibition when they need a beautiful woman’s picture. The exhibition has many racing models too, so they take pictures of them instead of the racing cars. They don’t need car’s pictures only the model pictures. So they take pictures secretly and naturally.but I am not. I don't go exhibition. and I also can't take a picture. I live just countryside. so, I take a scenary.
>> I never do that, I don’t go to exhibition and I also don’t take pictures. I’d rather go to countryside so I can take photos of some beautiful scenery. I expect our today class,see you,
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