Security guard slammed after telling blind man guide dog wasn\'t allowed in shopping centre
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1. What was the article about?
The one blind man was kicked out by shopping center security guard for his guide dog.
>> The one blind man was kicked out by the shopping center security guard for his guide dog.
2. Why do you think the security guard is letting the blind man with his dog out of the shopping mall?
Because the security guard was just trained and known about that all dogs should not allowed to enter the shopping center where he worked.
>> CORRECT
3. Aside from dogs, what other animals can you think that can help the blind people?
I think any animals can do same guide work as dogs who can be cats, birds or even insect also. If he or she will be trained well, they can do any of jobs more than recent guide dogs do.
>> I think any animals can do same guide work as dogs like cats, birds or even insect as well. If he or she will be trained well, they can do any of jobs more than recent guide dogs do.
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