see a doctor.
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Hi [이름]!
Happy Friday!
First of all, I want to say sorry for my absence yesterday.
I was really feeling terrible.
I tried to make myself feel better before my shift started, but I failed.
I think my body is not that healthy anymore.
I don\'t really go for check-ups.
I hate them.
Frankly speaking, I don\'t want to be surprised that I have a very serious health condition.
Anyway, I am okay now.
In addition, please don\'t forget to see the corrections and suggestions below.
See you in our class! ^.^
... Teacher Paula ... ^.~
Useally i go to see a doctor irregularly.
>> Usually, I go to see a doctor irregularly.
I go to clinic when i feel some problem of my body.
>> I go to the clinic when I feel some problems of my body.
>> OR: I go to the clinic when I feel some physical problems.
Although i feel some uncomfortable i try to overcome by myself without any medicine.
>> Although I feel a little uncomfortable, I try to overcome it by myself without any medicine.
>> OR: Although I feel a little uncomfortable, I try to overcome it by myself without any medication.
Sometimes it cause that the ill get worser.
>> Sometimes, it causes the ill to become worse.
Ah! ofcourse i have routine check-up every two years.
>> Ah! Of course, I have a check-up routine every two years.
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