see a doctor.

2014-06-27 · 첨삭 강사 Paula

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Useally i go to see a doctor irregularly.I go to clinic when i feel some problem of my body. Although i feel some uncomfortable i try to overcome by myself without any medicine.Sometimes it cause that the ill get worser. Ah! ofcourse i have routine check-up every two years.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]!

Happy Friday!

 

First of all, I want to say sorry for my absence yesterday.

I was really feeling terrible.

I tried to make myself feel better before my shift started, but I failed.

I think my body is not that healthy anymore.

I don\'t really go for check-ups.

I hate them.

Frankly speaking, I don\'t want to be surprised that I have a very serious health condition.

 

Anyway, I am okay now.

In addition, please don\'t forget to see the corrections and suggestions below.

See you in our class! ^.^

 

... Teacher Paula ... ^.~

 

 

Useally i go to see a doctor irregularly.

>> Usually, I go to see a doctor irregularly.

I go to clinic when i feel some problem of my body.

>> I go to the clinic when I feel some problems of my body.

>> OR: I go to the clinic when I feel some physical problems.

Although i feel some uncomfortable i try to overcome by myself without any medicine.

>> Although I feel a little uncomfortable, I try to overcome it by myself without any medicine.

>> OR: Although I feel a little uncomfortable, I try to overcome it by myself without any medication.

Sometimes it cause that the ill get worser.
>> Sometimes, it causes the ill to become worse.
Ah! ofcourse i have routine check-up every two years.

>> Ah! Of course, I have a check-up routine every two years.

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