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2014-07-16 · 첨삭 강사 Debby

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Hi again Debby :) I want to show you myself, so I found out how it works but I couldn't find why it doens't work. I'm sorry for not showing you. I also like to talk about our life like weather, plans, etc rather than a textbook. Let's talk about each other more next time. :) Take care :D <Essay> If my family want to do that, I will. But before that, I will say that I want to meet her more time and if I find that we can't get along well, I will ask them to find another person for her and me.

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Hi there [이름]!^^ It\'s okay that I cannot see you. I will just pretend I\'m calling a DJ and I\'m speaking in English.kkkkk Well it is also nice to have topics outside the textbook because in reality,I want to target your speaking where you have to speak your own ideas rather than referring to the book for other people\'s ideas. You are both thinking and speaking at the same time! Way to go [이름]! Let\'s keep it up! Take care^^ T.Debby^^ Here are my corrections for you today: Hi again Debby :) >> CORRECTOR> Hello Debby^^I want to show you myself, so I found out how it works but I couldn\'t find why it doens\'t work. >> I want to show myself to you so I found out how it works but I can\'t find the reason why it didn\'t. I\'m sorry for not showing you. >> CORRECT OR> I\'m sorry for not showing myself. I also like to talk about our life like weather, plans, etc rather than a textbook. >> CORRECT OR> I also prefer other topics rathe than the topics from a textbook.  Let\'s talk about each other more next time. :) >> CORRECT OR> Let\'s talk more about those things next time.^^Take care :D >> CORRECT OR> Be safe all the time!^^<Essay>If my family want to do that, I will. >> If my family wants to do that, I will. But before that, I will say that I want to meet her more time and if I find that we can\'t get along well, I will ask them to find another person for her and me. >> But before that, I will say that I want to meet her more and if I find that we can\'t get along well, I will ask them to find another person for her and me.

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