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Q3: In your most intimate conversations with family or close friends, what have people said they most like about you?
In my most intimate conversations with family or close friends, They usually said that "You are really an outgoing, bright, and funny girl" I also agree with their said.
I always try to make people happy I would you like to share my happiness with my family and close friends. If I make them happy and It just might come in handy and I could meet more good people I know.
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This is the continuation to my corrections:
Q3: In your most intimate conversations with family or close friends, what have people said they most like about you?
>> Correct!In my most intimate conversations with family or close friends, They usually said that "You are really an outgoing, bright, and funny girl" I also agree with their said.
>> In my most intimate conversations with family or close friends, they usually said that I am really an outgoing, bright, and funny girl, I also agree with this.
I always try to make people happy I would you like to share my happiness with my family and close friends.
>> I always try to make people happy, I like to share my happiness with my family and close friends.
If I make them happy and It just might come in handy and I could meet more good people I know.
>> If I make them happy, this just might come in handy and I could meet more good people.
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