See you again

2011-06-30 · 첨삭 강사 Connie

학생이 쓴 원문

I didn't know that today was the last class with you, but mom said so. I'll go camping and stay overnight there. I have to study for the final test during next week. Then, I'll go to Canada next Sunday. I think we can talk on the phone for a month. I'll be back in August. After coming back home, I hope we can talk on the phone again. Thank you for your class and for everything. I hope I can improve my English a lot more than now. Take good care and see you again~

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! I'm so sad, knowing that you won't be having class with me anymore. I didn't know that tonight was our last class as well. I 'm really hoping that when you have your telephone class again it would still be with me. I am really going to miss you. Anyway, take care always and don't forget to practice your English skills so that you will improve more. I didn't know that today was the last class with you, but mom said so. >>I didn't know that tonight was my class with you, but my mom said so.I'll go camping and stay overnight there. >>I'll go on camping and will stay there overnight. I have to study for the final test during next week. >>I have to study for the final test next week. Then, I'll go to Canada next Sunday. >>CORRECT! >>I'll be leaving for Canada next Sunday. I think we can talk on the phone for a month. >>I think we can't talk on the phone for a month. I'll be back in August. >>CORRECT! After coming back home, I hope we can talk on the phone again. >>When I come back home, I hope we could talk on the phone again. Thank you for your class and for everything. >>CORRECT! I hope I can improve my English a lot more than now. >>I hope that I can improve my English more than now. Take good care and see you again~ >>CORRECT! >>Take care and I hope to talk to you again.

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