selection my way2
학생이 쓴 원문
First, I spent many time at my work about 14 times every day.
Second, this company located in Go - Seong. So I spent many times on the road. the company is located far from downtown. between downtown, there are few bus line so when I miss my company bus, it's difficult to comet to company. exept my company, this place has just field and sea.
I can't work this company for a long time. I have to make a plan about my job. I have two way.
강사 첨삭
First, I spent many time at my work about 14 times every day.
>>First of all, I spent 14 hours at work everyday.Second, this company located in Go - Seong. So I spent many times on the road.
>>Second is that this company is located in Go-Seong.
the company is located far from downtown.
>>Since it is far from downtown, I have to spend much time on the road to go there.
between downtown, there are few bus line so when I miss my company bus, it's difficult to comet to company.
>>There are few bus in downtown lines so when I miss my company bus, it’s difficult to go to work.
exept my company, this place has just field and sea.
>>Except for my company, this place only has fields and the sea.I can't work this company for a long time.
>>For these reasons, I can’t work in this company for a long time.
I have to make a plan about my job.
>>I have to make a plan to look for another job.
I have two way.
>> I have two options.
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