selection my way2

2010-02-26 · 첨삭 강사 Jennifer

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First, I spent many time at my work about 14 times every day. Second, this company located in Go - Seong. So I spent many times on the road. the company is located far from downtown. between downtown, there are few bus line so when I miss my company bus, it's difficult to comet to company. exept my company, this place has just field and sea. I can't work this company for a long time. I have to make a plan about my job. I have two way.

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First, I spent many time at my work about 14 times every day. >>First of all, I spent 14 hours at work everyday.Second, this company located in Go - Seong. So I spent many times on the road. >>Second is that this company is located in Go-Seong. the company is located far from downtown. >>Since it is far from downtown, I have to spend much time on the road to go there. between downtown, there are few bus line so when I miss my company bus, it's difficult to comet to company. >>There are few bus in downtown lines so when I miss my company bus, it’s difficult to go to work.  exept my company, this place has just field and sea. >>Except for my company, this place only has fields and the sea.I can't work this company for a long time. >>For these reasons, I can’t work in this company for a long time. I have to make a plan about my job. >>I have to make a plan to look for another job. I have two way. >> I have two options.

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