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2010-02-26 · 첨삭 강사 Jennifer

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First way is to be a post officer. On july, there is a exam for post officer. In Korea, Post officer is a public service personnel. so the job ensure stability. I think that I would work after marriage and I could work until 60 years old. but since the task is similiar with a banker, i am not sure i could stand it without any exciting thing. Second way is prepare for CPS. It is a international secretary license. when I got the license, it will be easy to seperate my position which offer to me better condition.(it include rising my salary.) For the license, I have to use English fluently and work here until next january. but It has some risk. After marraige, I wouldn't to do it.

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First way is to be a post officer. >>The first option is to be a post officer. On july, there is a exam for post officer. >>On July, there will be an exam for those who want to be post officers. In Korea, Post officer is a public service personnel. so the job ensure stability. >>In Korea, a Post Officer is a public service personnel. It means this job ensures stability of tenure. I think that I would work after marriage and I could work until 60 years old. >>I think that I would work after marrying and would until I’m 60 years old.  but since the task is similiar with a banker, i am not sure i could stand it without any exciting thing. >>Since the task is similar of that of a banker and nothing exciting happens, I am not sure if I could stand it for long.Second way is prepare for CPS. >>My second choice is to prepare for CPS. It is a international secretary license. >>It is an international secretarial license. when I got the license, it will be easy to seperate my position which offer to me better condition.(it include rising my salary.) >>If I have this license, it would be easier for me to get a better offer and higher salary. For the license, I have to use English fluently and work here until next january.  >>In order for me to get the license, I should be fluent in English and I have to work here until January. but It has some risk. >>But, it has some risks as well. After marraige, I wouldn't to do it. >> After getting married, I wouldn’t do it anymore.

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