self homework

2016-01-05 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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If you could change one thing about your past, what would you change? - Noting. because everything were on my decision and it made me what i am now. But if i have to change something must be, i want to change my life in Canada. I regret my attitude about english study. I should have been a little harder to study. What’s your favorite thing to do on the weekend? - I have hope about my lifestyle. first, i want to have a job that does not work on weekends and spend time with my people. If it can be, i am going to be happy whatever we do. What’s your goal in life right now? What’s your goal in life 10 years from now? - The first goal is to obtain a stable job. after 10 years from now, i will be in Canada with warm coffee.

강사 첨삭

Good evening, [이름]!

Thank you so much for your time. I really appreciate it a lot.
Wow! I hope that all of your goals in life will be achieved. ^^

I am excited to hear your stories again in class.

I hope that we will be have more topics to talk about in class. ^^
I am always here to guide you.
See you.
Teacher Nina


If you could change one thing about your past, what would you change?

- Noting. because everything were on my decision and it made me what i am now.

>> correct (spelling check: nothing ^^)
But if i have to change something must be, i want to change my life in Canada.
>>
But if i have to change something it must be the life I had in Canada.
I regret my attitude about english study.

>> I regret my attitude towards studying English.

I should have been a little harder to study.
>> I should have studied harder.

What’s your favorite thing to do on the weekend?
( This question means, your favorite to do on weekend such as watching movies, going to a special restaurant and so on. )^^

 - I have hope about my lifestyle.

>> (Can you please explain this sentence in class? ^^)
first, i want to have a job that does not work on weekends and spend time with my people.

>> First, I want to have a job that doesn\'t require me to work on weekends so I can spend time with my people.
If it can be, i am going to be happy whatever we do.

>> If it can\'t be,  I am going to be happy on whatever I do.

What’s your goal in life right now? What’s your goal in life 10 years from now?

- The first goal is to obtain a stable job.

>> Correct
after 10 years from now, i will be in Canada with warm coffee.

>> Ten years later, I will be in Canada and I will be drinking warm coffee.

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