self homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Good evening, [이름]!
Thank you so much for your time. I really appreciate it a lot.
Wow! I hope that all of your goals in life will be achieved. ^^
I am excited to hear your stories again in class.
I hope that we will be have more topics to talk about in class. ^^
I am always here to guide you.
See you.
Teacher Nina
If you could change one thing about your past, what would you change?
- Noting. because everything were on my decision and it made me what i am now.
>> correct (spelling check: nothing ^^)
But if i have to change something must be, i want to change my life in Canada.
>> But if i have to change something it must be the life I had in Canada.
I regret my attitude about english study.
>> I regret my attitude towards studying English.
I should have been a little harder to study.
>> I should have studied harder.
What’s your favorite thing to do on the weekend?
( This question means, your favorite to do on weekend such as watching movies, going to a special restaurant and so on. )^^
- I have hope about my lifestyle.
>> (Can you please explain this sentence in class? ^^)
first, i want to have a job that does not work on weekends and spend time with my people.
>> First, I want to have a job that doesn\'t require me to work on weekends so I can spend time with my people.
If it can be, i am going to be happy whatever we do.
>> If it can\'t be, I am going to be happy on whatever I do.
What’s your goal in life right now? What’s your goal in life 10 years from now?
- The first goal is to obtain a stable job.
>> Correct
after 10 years from now, i will be in Canada with warm coffee.
>> Ten years later, I will be in Canada and I will be drinking warm coffee.
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