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Strengths & Weaknesses
I have a very strong sense of responsibility and great patience. I completed all assignments on time and have maintained good relations with classmates and coworkers. When I worked for educational institute as a mathematics teacher, I had to cover up and understand the students who behave like playing tricks and inappropriate acts. So, I could develop my patience and acceptance. On the other hand, I'm quite persistent. I do feel well when I achieve my goals. So I never give up and try again until I get what I want. I think it would be good effects at the work later because I can improve my job performance and learn a lot through challenging.
objective
• To obtain an executive in Ghana utilizing my practical business skills, computer proficiency and fluent English
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Strengths & Weaknesses
>>CORRECT!I have a very strong sense of responsibility and great patience.
>>CORRECT!
I completed all assignments on time and have maintained good relations with classmates and coworkers.
>>CORRECT!When I worked for educational institute as a mathematics teacher, I had to cover up and understand the students who behave like playing tricks and inappropriate acts.
>>When I worked for an educational institute as a Mathematics teacher, I had to cope up and understand the students who behave differently and show inappropriate acts.
So, I could develop my patience and acceptance.
>>CORRECT!
On the other hand, I\'m quite persistent.
>>CORRECT!I do feel well when I achieve my goals.
>>CORRECT!
So I never give up and try again until I get what I want.
>>CORRECT!
I think it would be good effects at the work later because I can improve my job performance and learn a lot through challenging.
>>I think it would produce a good effect towards my work later on because I can improve my job performance and learn a lot through challenges.objective
>>Objective:• To obtain an executive in Ghana utilizing my practical business skills, computer proficiency and fluent English
>>To obtain an executive position in Ghana utilizing my practical business skills, computer proficiency and fluency in English.
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