Self-intorduction
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름],
Thank you for doing your assignment
It\'s nice to meet you.
I\'ll see you on our next meeting.
Teacher Brian,
My name is [Name]. Lee I was born on October 27th, 1991.
>>CORRECT
and I graduated from the university in February 22th, 2018,
>> I graduated from the University last February 22nd 2018
It took me 5 years to finish my studies.
>>CORRECT
Now I\'m looking for a job, studying Eng[이름]h and preparing the exam for the company.
>> At present I am looking for a job while studying Eng[이름]h and preparing for the examination of the company.
1. I want to wake up at 6, but I always waste my time because I woke up at 10:00.
>>I wanted to wake up early at 6 Am but I always wake up at 10:00 and I waste a lot of time for waking up late.
What I really want to do is waking up early and starting daily work.
>>What I really want to do is to wake up early and start a day job.
Waking up early in the morning and starting daily work is what I really want to do to achieve my goals,
>> I need to wake up early and to start working to achieve my goals.
but I\'m not still doing it at all. At a word: I live a lazy life.
>> But I live a lazy life.
So I thought why I woke up so late. I usually have the habit of delaying the work that I have to do and I do this work until midnight,
>> I have a bad habit of delaying my work load and finishing them at night
which makes me sleep late and to repeat the same mistake over again.
>> Which is why I sleep late and then I keep repeating the same mistake all over again
It is hard to change my habit because I\'m used to living like this,
>>It\'s quite difficult to change by bad habit because I\'m used on this kind of lifestyle
but I am going to fix this problem step by step. T
>> In time I will be able to fix this problem of mine, on step at a time
the first thing I have to do is wake up 30 minutes earlier than usual, today I made it.
>> Today I was able to wake up 30 minutes earlier than usual, and I would like to continue waking up earlier than usual
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