Self-intorduction

2018-04-10 · 첨삭 강사 Brian

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My name is [Name].Lee. I was born on October 27th, 1991. and I graduated from the university in February 22th, 2018, It took me 5 years to finish my studies. Now I'm looking for a job, studying Eng[이름]h and preparing the exam for the company. 1. I want to wake up at 6, but I always waste my time because I woke up at 10:00. What I really want to do is waking up early and starting daily work. Waking up early in the morning and starting daily work is what I really want to do to achieve my goals, but I'm not still doing it at all. At a word: I live a lazy life. So I thought why I woke up so late. I usually have the habit of delaying the work that I have to do and I do this work until midnight, which makes me sleep late and to repeat the same mistake over again. It is hard to change my habit because I'm used to living like this, but I am going to fix this problem step by step. The first thing I have to do is wake up 30 minutes earlier than usual, today I made it.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름],
Thank you for doing your assignment
It\'s nice to meet you.
I\'ll see you on our next meeting.


Teacher Brian,



My name is [Name]. Lee I was born on October 27th, 1991.

>>CORRECT

and I graduated from the university in February 22th, 2018,

>> I graduated from the University last February 22nd 2018

It took me 5 years to finish my studies.

>>CORRECT

Now I\'m looking for a job, studying Eng[이름]h and preparing the exam for the company.
>> At present I am looking for a job while studying Eng[이름]h and preparing for the examination of the company.
1. I want to wake up at 6, but I always waste my time because I woke up at 10:00.
>>I wanted to wake up early at 6 Am but I always wake up at 10:00 and I waste a lot of time for waking up late.
What I really want to do is waking up early and starting daily work.
>>What I really want to do is to wake up early and start a day job.
Waking up early in the morning and starting daily work is what I really want to do to achieve my goals,

>> I need to wake up early and to start working to achieve my goals.

but I\'m not still doing it at all. At a word: I live a lazy life.
>> But I live a lazy life.
So I thought why I woke up so late. I usually have the habit of delaying the work that I have to do and I do this work until midnight,

>> I have a bad habit of delaying my work load and finishing them at night

which makes me sleep late and to repeat the same mistake over again.
>> Which is why I sleep late and then I keep repeating the same mistake all over again
It is hard to change my habit because I\'m used to living like this,

>>It\'s quite difficult to change by bad habit because I\'m used on this kind of lifestyle

but I am going to fix this problem step by step. T

>> In time I will be able to fix this problem of mine, on step at a time

the first thing I have to do is wake up 30 minutes earlier than usual, today I made it.

>> Today I was able to wake up 30 minutes earlier than usual, and I would like to continue waking up earlier than usual


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