Self introduction 1

My name is [이름], [이름]. I have six family members. I'm the oldest daugther. My hobbies are reading books, watching movies and listening to music. Mainly, I like old books. I like current literature, too. I think if I can read I like them. I read Alabama song yesterday. It's about Zelda Sayre who is a wife of F.Scott Fitzgerald. It was interesting. I've never been to abroad. But as reading books and watching movies, I can feel a little bit I'm in abroad. I can experience something that I've never done before. I don't like to cook but I have to. Because I'm the oldest daugther.;/ I'll be busy when my lectures begin in March. So I need to do my best everything. P.S. Do I must write after class? I'm on vacation now. In semester, I'll talking with you in shcool.

Hi Su Jin,                  Thank you for writing about yourself today. I뭢 really happy to receive a composition from you. I think you have a good writing skill that you can develop more if you are going to write everyday. If you have time I뭢 encouraging you to write more. I want to you to improve all aspects of your English skills. I뭢 happy to be your teacher. If you have any question, just ask me in the class. See you tomorrow! -Verna- My name is [이름], [이름]. >>CorrectI have six family members. >>Correct  I'm the oldest daugther. >>I'm the oldest daughter. My hobbies are reading books, watching movies and listening to music. >>CorrectMainly, I like old books. >>Correct I like current literature, too. >>CorrectI think if I can read I like them. >> I think if I can read them I will like them.I read an Alabama song yesterday. >>Correct  It's about Zelda Sayre who is a wife of F.Scott Fitzgerald. >> It's about Zelda Sayre who is the wife of F. Scott Fitzgerald.  It was interesting. >>CorrectI've never been to abroad. >>Correct  But as reading books and watching movies, I can feel a little bit I'm in abroad. >> But because of reading books and watching movies, I feel like I almost went abroad.  I can experience something that I've never done before. >>CorrectI don't like to cook but I have to. Because I'm the oldest daugther.;/ >>I don뭪 like to cook but I have to do it because I뭢 the oldest daughter.I'll be busy when my lectures begin in March. >>CorrectSo I need to do my best everything. >> So I need to do my best in everything.P.S. Do I must write after class? >> Do I have to write after class?I'm on vacation now. >> I뭢 on a vacation right now.  In semester, I'll talking with you in shcool.Next semester, I뭠l be talking to you in school.