Self Introduction
학생이 쓴 원문
My name is [이름] Yang.
I will be turning 29 years old in this july.
I majored in a urban planning and engineering at one of Busan universities.
I aim to build a city in person.
강사 첨삭
Hi Ian,
Thank you so much for sending in your homework.
I appreciate it a lot!
Have a great day then!
Teacher ELLY.
Self Introduction
My name is [이름] Yang.
CORRECT!
or>>I am [이름] Yang.
I will be turning 29 years old in this july.
I will be turning 29 years old in this july.
>>I will be turning 29 years old this July.
I majored in a urban planning and engineering at one of Busan universities.
I majored in a urban planning and engineering at one of Busan universities.
>>I majored in Urban Planning and Engineering at one of Busan\'s universities.
I aim to build a city in person.
I aim to build a city in person.
>>I aim to build a city on my own.
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