Self introduction 2

My hobby is traveling and communicating with other people. I have a travel experience in 14 countries. and I lived for three years in a philippines and Austrailia. That time, I met friends from all over the world. It was very fun trying to communicate in English with each other. I like speaking English with foreigners very much, and I'm interested in other country's culture. These days, I watch American shows and spend time with English-speaking friends. English is necessary to communicate with people from oher countries. I also joined Voluntary Activities for Care & Share International Language School in the Philippines for 9 months in 2009. As student master volunteer, I assisted students in their studies and acted as chaperone in some of the student's activites. During that time I have learned the English language through talking with school employees and having native English class.

Hi Julie!   How are you? It\'s good that you sent me another composition. Thanks for sharing these things to me. I do hope that I can help you with this. Please, find time to check the corrections that I\'ve made.   Maybe you could write also about this, What is your Philosophy in life?   T. Barbara**,   My hobby is traveling and communicating with other people. >> Correct! OR:>> I like traveling and talking with people.I have a travel experience in 14 countries. and I lived for three years in a philippines and Austrailia. >> I had traveled 14 countries and I lived for three years in the Philippines and Australia. That time, I met friends from all over the world. >> Correct! OR:>> During that time, I made friends all over the world.It was very fun trying to communicate in English with each other. >> It was very fun communicating in English with each other. I like speaking English with foreigners very much, and I\'m interested in other country\'s culture. >> I like speaking English with foreigners very much, and I\'m interested in another}: any of various alternatives; some other
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