self-introduction

hi my name is Jennifer korean name is Jung in [이름] there are 4 members in my family. there is husband,husband'mother,my baby and me. my hobby is listening music. current, i sing children's song for my baby. thank you for your time.

Hello Jennifer, I'm very happy to receive a composition from you.I encourage you to write more so you can improve your writing skills. Maybe you have a good voice now because you always sing for your baby. I hope to hear you sing. See you later! Love, Verna   hi >> Correct^^my name is Jennifer >> Correct (just remember to always start your sentence in capital letter)korean name is Jung in [이름] >> My korean name is Jung in [이름].there are 4 members in my family. >> Correct^^there is husband,husband'mother,my baby and me. >> My husband, his mom (my mother-in-law), my baby and me.my hobby is listening music. >> My hobby is listening to music.current, i sing children's song for my baby. >>Currently, I sing children's song for my baby.thank you for your time. >> Correct^^