self-introduction

2012-11-27 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

학생이 쓴 원문

Hi, Jane I am your student from today. I am pleasure with you. I want to learn from you, because, your voice make me comfortable and I am so excited. I think that my English skill is poor, especially pronuciation and grammer. so I hope that I will be like native speaker someday. When I was at high school, my neighborhood was Candian. We could be friendly. so I am not afraid of speaking to foreigner. I will wait your calling. thank you

강사 첨삭

Happy Tuesday! :) You did well in class today! Thumbs up! :D Here are the corrections in your composition. \" That\'s what learning is. You suddenly understand something you\'ve understood all your life but in a new way. \" -T. Jane ^^ Hi, Jane >>Hi Jane,I am your student from today. >>I am your student. I am pleasure with you. >>It was a pleasure to meet you. I want to learn from you, because, your voice make me comfortable and I am so excited.>>I want to learn from you because your voice makes} replaces
{make}: wrong word\">makes me comfortable and I am so excited.I think that my English skill is poor, especially pronuciation and grammer. >>I think that my English skill is poor especially my pronunciation}: the manner in which someone utters a word
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{pronuciation}: wrong word\">pronunciation and grammar}: the branch of linguistics that deals with syntax and morphology (and sometimes also deals with semantics)
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{grammer}: wrong word\">grammar. so I hope that I will be like native speaker someday.>>So I hope that I will be like a native speaker} replaces
{native speaker}: wrong word\">a native speaker someday.When I was at high school, my neighborhood was Candian. >>When I was in} replaces
{at}: wrong word\">in high school, my neighbor was Canadian}: of or relating to Canada or its people
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{Candian}: wrong word\">Canadian. We could be friendly. >>We could be friends. so I am not afraid of speaking to foreigner. >>So I am not afraid of speaking to foreigners} replaces
{foreigner}: wrong word\">foreigners. I will wait your calling. thank you >>I will wait for your call. thank you>>Thank you.

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