Self introduction for interview
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]! :)
Wow, it\'s good to hear from you. I wish to have wonderful and fun conversations with you later. I can\'t to hear your jokes either. :) See you!
warm regards,
Teacher Lucy
Hello, I\'m Min Seop Yeo, an applicant for E-tech engineering and construction, who approaches people and disarms them.
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>>Hello, I\'m Min Seop Yeo, an applicant for E-tech engineering and construction. I approach people and disarm their guard.
With this ability, when freshmen felt a little awkward because they were first met, I used to change awkward mood into good atmosphere by joking.
>>With this ability, when freshmen felt a little awkward because they first met, I used to change awkward mood into good atmosphere by joking.
In every business, good atmosphere helps team collaboration.
>>In every business, good atmosphere helps team in collaborating.
>>In every business, good atmosphere helps team to collaborate.
And Team collaboration makes better team performance.
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Based on this ability, I will be a talented person who creates bright atmosphere after joining E-Tech engineering and construction.
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>>Based on my abilities,I believe I\'ll be a talented person who creates bright atmosphere after joining E-Tech engineering and construction.
And I want to disarm you and make a good interview.
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>>I want to showcase and possess a positive interview.
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