Self introduction in English
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello I\'m Suyoung Cho.
I major in English because I have had a lot of interests in English since I was young. I participated different kinds of activities which enhanced my English level in the university. I am continuously studying English and I realized that English is the main source of motivation and confidence in my life.
Now I teach middle school students in English academy and my biggest interest is how I can make interesting class that can make student focus on. So I want to become a professional teacher who can derive student\'s integrated motivation for continuous English learning. Ultimately, I want to help students have a broader view through English.
강사 첨삭
Wow, nice job, [이름]!!!
If you consciously learned one new thing a day, over time it would become a way of life for you. Just continue gaining knowledge from your day to day activities in life.
See you!!!
T.Jeny
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I major in English because I have had a lot of interests in English since I was young.
I major in English because I have had a lot of interests in English since I was young.
>>I majored in English because I have had a lot of interests in English since I was young.
I participated different kinds of activities which enhanced my English level in the university.
>>I participated in different kinds of activities that enhanced my English level in the university.
I am continuously studying English and I realized that English is the main source of motivation and confidence in my life.
>>correct
Now I teach middle school students in English academy and my biggest interest is how I can make interesting class that can make student focus on.
Now I teach middle school students in English academy and my biggest interest is how I can make interesting class that can make student focus on.
>>Now I teach middle school students in an English academy, and my biggest interest is how I can make an interesting class that can make students focus on.
So I want to become a professional teacher who can derive student\'s integrated motivation for continuous English learning.
>>correct
Ultimately, I want to help students have a broader view through English.
>>Ultimately, I want to help students have a broader view of English.
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