self introduction, reason of application
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
self introduction
Hello This is [Name] [이름] [이름].
>>> Hello, I\'m [이름].
I applied since I want to be a process development expert.
>>> I applied because I wanted to become a process development expert.
I have developed professionalism in my field of study.
>>> I have developed my expertise in my field.
I majored in pharmaceutical engineering.
>>> CORRECT!
I took lots of courses on medicine and get 4.23.
>>> I took many lectures on medicine and received 4.23.
I earned a Engineer Chemical Analysis and Chemical Engineer.
>>> I earned Engineering in Chemical Analysis and Chemical Engineering.
Also, I built up verification experiene.
>>> Also, I gained verification experience.
While doing practice test analysis, I learned physico-chemical and microbial test.
>>> I learned physical chemistry and microbial testing while doing practice test analysis.
Plus I won bronze prize at the chemical engineering competition.
>>> And I won a bronze prize at a chemical engineering competition.
Therefore I will carry out my duties at Samsung Biologics with the expertise and sense of purpose.
>>> Therefore, I will work at Samsung Biologics with a sense of expertise and purpose.
reason of application
I majored in pharmaceutical engineering.
>>> CORRECT!
I felt an interest in pharmaceuticals and GMP while taking classes such as ‘Quality Control of Pharmaceutical Manufacturing’, ‘Pharmaceutical Analysis and Experiment’, and ‘Equipment Analysis and Experiment’.
>>> CORRECT!
Samsung Biologics is a competitive company with CDO\'s S-Celerate and the 4th plant of 256,000L.(two hundred fifty six thousand)
>>> CORRECT!
I applied since I want to analyze various chemical substances and perform process development tasks.
>>> CORRECT!
I earned a Engineer Chemical Analysis and Chemical Engineer to develop my expertise.
>>> I have acquired a chemical analysis engineer and a chemical engineer to develop my expertise.
I want to enrich life of man with my capability and Samsung Biologics\'s skills.
>>> I want to enrich human life with my skills and Samsung Biologics\' skills.
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