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Hello, my name is [이름], [이름]. I’m currently a senior majoring in Translation and interpretation of Spanish at Hankuk University of Foreign Studies. I’m applying for a position within the Regulatory Affairs department of Celltrion. I think I’m suitable person for this position for the following three reasons. First, I have strong consistency. Once I determined to do something, I try to my best to accomplish it. When I decided to achieve a Spanish certification of high level, all people around me said that you can’t do that. But, I studied and filled out one paper every day until I got a seventies notes in a year and I finally got through. Second, I’m very meticulous and prudent. When I worked as part-time interpreter in many forums I was recognized as being a meticulous and I got a proposal to work in Mexico as interpreter for three months and there I translated and interpreted various didactic materials.

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Hello, my name is [이름], [이름].

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I’m currently a senior majoring in Translation and interpretation of Spanish at Hankuk University of Foreign Studies.

>>I am currently a senior student majoring in Translation and Interpretation of Spanish at Hankuk University of Foreign Studies. 

I’m applying for a position within the Regulatory Affairs department of Celltrion.

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I think I’m suitable person for this position for the following three reasons.
>>I think I’m suitable for this position for the following reasons.
First, I have strong consistency.

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Once I determined to do something, I try to my best to accomplish it.

>>Once I\'m determined to do something, I try to do my best to accomplish it.

When I decided to achieve a Spanish certification of high level, all people around me said that you can’t do that.

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But, I studied and filled out one paper every day until I got a seventies notes in a year and I finally got through.

>>But, I studied and filled out one paper every day until I got a seventynotes in a year and I finally got through.
Second, I’m very meticulous and prudent.

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When I worked as part-time interpreter in many forums I was recognized as being a meticulous and I got a proposal to work in Mexico as interpreter for three months and there I translated and interpreted various didactic materials.

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