Self-reflection
학생이 쓴 원문
I often have time for self-reflection in the morning prayer time.
I usually attend the every dawn pray worship with my husband.
We pray to God to reflect of myself or repent our sins.
I sometimes cry to God when I pray.
After the prayer ends, I feel comfortable and joy that God gives me.
I think it\'s really good to have time for self-reflection as an opportunity to get to know myself better and look back on the mistakes I made.
May God bless you.
I believe that I will improve more and more and that tomorrow will be a better person than today.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Elizabeth!
It\'s nice to know that you can self-reflect every day. I also think it is very important because it can help us see ourselves and improve on things that we lack.
-T. Caitlyn
I often have time for self-reflection in the morning prayer time.
>> I often have time for self-reflection during the morning prayer.
I usually attend the every dawn pray worship with my husband.
I usually attend the every dawn pray worship with my husband.
>> I attend the prayer worship with my husband every dawn.
We pray to God to reflect of myself or repent our sins.
We pray to God to reflect of myself or repent our sins.
>> We pray to God to reflect on ourselves or repent for our sins.
I sometimes cry to God when I pray.
I sometimes cry to God when I pray.
>> CORRECT
After the prayer ends, I feel comfortable and joy that God gives me.
After the prayer ends, I feel comfortable and joy that God gives me.
>> After praying, I feel comfortable and joyful because of what God has given me.
I think it\'s really good to have time for self-reflection as an opportunity to get to know myself better and look back on the mistakes I made.
I think it\'s really good to have time for self-reflection as an opportunity to get to know myself better and look back on the mistakes I made.
>> CORRECT
May God bless you.
May God bless you.
>> CORRECT
I believe that I will improve more and more and that tomorrow will be a better person than today.
I believe that I will improve more and more and that tomorrow will be a better person than today.
>> I believe that I will improve more and that tomorrow, I will be a better person than I am today.
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