Selfish person
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! ^^
Wooow! I could that you were very angry.
Relax. Don\'t think about him too much.
Don\'t make friends with him if you don\'t like him.
Keep calm and don\'t mind him.
God will punish him for his behavior.
I will see you in our class.
~~ Teacher Kris
I really hate that guy(Im [Name] Bin).
>> Correct
He is strange person.
>> He is a strange person.
He annoy to our classmate when he is very angry.
>> He annoys my classmates whenever he is angry.
When he feels good he is friendly at my class.
>> When he feels good, he is friendly in our class.
We practiced soccer on the playground.
>> Correct
We say him to don\'t in the goalkeeper position.
>> We told him to be in the goal keeper\'s position.
And he said the bad words.
>> And he spitted bad words.
And my friend push him by mistake.
>> And, my friend pushed him by mistake.
And he say bad words.
>> He spitted bad words again.
He is a Christian priest son but he is very selfish.
>> He is a son of a Christian priest but he is very selfish.
He said bad words many times to me.
>> He spitted bad words to me many times.
And I am not satisfied with him.
>> I feel bad about what he did.
He is not a person.
>> Correct
He is a monster.
>> Correct
He also keep a diary and he say bad words to my classmate and write down about we are very selfish.
>> He also writes on his diary that we are the selfish ones and not him.
And he also show a diary to his father.
>> He always shows his diary to his father.
And they think we bullied Im [Name] Bin.
>> So, they always think that we are bullying Im [Name] Bin.
We hate girl but also Won Bin.
>> We hate a girl and so with Won Bin.
We have a soccer match and we don\'t have to seperate but Won bin is very selfish he always annoy to classmate when he was not in the mood of talking and playing.
>> We had a soccer math and we didn\'t have to separate but Won Bin was very selfish and he annoyed my classmates. He is very selfish whenever he is not in the mood of talking or playing.
He was very angry and he talked to girl and say bad words to us.
>> He was very angry and he talked like a girl. He always spits bad words to us.
He is a girl.
>> Correct
He is bad guy and not our friend.
>> He is a bad guy and not our friend.
He is one of the most bad guy in the world.
>> He is one of the most bad guy in the world.
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