selfishness
학생이 쓴 원문
Policies cannot win human selfishness.
Everyone regard their own interests as the most important factor when they make bills or improve policies.
The professors of the Education College oppose reducing or aboloishing of that college.
The reason is that they have concern only retaining of theiir job as professors.
강사 첨삭
Hi Ms. [이름]!
This is really a big issue because the future of the teachers are at risk. Of course, we cannot easily solve this since the main cause is population.
I think professors must understand the future careers of the teachers, yes they may be licensed, but the question is, will they be able to practice their professions?
Talk to you in class.
Aki~
Policies cannot win human selfishness.
>>> Polices cannot win against human selfishness.
Everyone regards their own interests as the most important factor when they make bills or improve policies.
>>> CORRECT
The professors of the Education College oppose reducing or aboloishing of that college.
>>> The professors of the Education College oppose reducing or abolishing that college.
The reason is that they have concern only retaining of theiir job as professors.
>>> The reason is that they have concerns about only retaining their job as professors.
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