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I agree with the result of this study.
My father-in-law\'s behavior and attitude change when he meet his grandren, my daughters.
He is very unfriendly and uncercern when he treats his sons, including my husband.
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I agree with the result of this study.
>>> CORRECT!
My father-in-law\'s behavior and attitude change when he meet his grandren, my daughters.
My father-in-law\'s behavior and attitude change when he meet his grandren, my daughters.
>>> My father-in-law\'s behavior and attitude changed when he met his grandchildren, my daughters.
He is very unfriendly and uncercern when he treats his sons, including my husband.
He is very unfriendly and uncercern when he treats his sons, including my husband.
>>> He is very unfriendly and unconcern when he treats his sons including my husband.
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