Sentences

1. Many people who did something wrong show an irresponsible attitude. 2. I'm so generous person that I don't usually feel I am wasting money. 3. In Olympic games noisy sounds is very big hindrance for players. 4. Puzzle games are very famous of all worlds. 5. These days, I'm too hectic that I can't finish all my homeworks. 6. A computer which I bought came up with a two-year guarantee. 7. My friend has a huge grudge against the world. 8. Many people who have lots of money like gambling. 9. Deviance is something I feel afraid of and what I want

Hi Nicolas,  nice work with the sentences here, thanks for doing extra effort in learning even outside our classes. Keep up the good work, and you are doing the right thing. =) I put in my corrections here for further improvement.

Have a great weekend! Looking forward seeing you on Monday! ^^

- T. Michelle =)

1. Many people who did something wrong show an irresponsible attitude.

>>> Correct
2. I\'m so generous person that I don\'t usually feel I am wasting money.

>>>  I\'m a very generous person that I don\'t usually feel I am wasting money.
3. In Olympic games noisy sounds is very big hindrance for players.

>>> In the Olympic games noise ia a very big hindrance for players.
4. Puzzle games are very famous of all worlds.

>>> Puzzle games are very famous all over the world.
5. These days, I\'m too hectic that I can\'t finish all my homeworks.

>>> These days, my schedule is so hectic that I can\'t finish all my homework.
6. A computer which I bought came up with a two-year guarantee.

>>> The computer which I bought was with a two-year guarantee.
7. My friend has a huge grudge against the world.

>>> Correct
8. Many people who have lots of money like gambling.

>>> Correct
9. Deviance is something I feel afraid of and what I want .

>>>Deviance is something I feel afraid of and  want .

>>> OR: Deviance is something I feel afraid of and not what I want .