sentences that make you motivated to learn English.
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Hi. Yeong!
Please try to so focus on your subject verb agreement, articles. and your tenses.
It will help also improve your grammar and your English as well.
Anyways please check your corrections below:
The English is one of the most famous language in the world. When I traveled at other countries.
>> The English is one of the most famous language in the world.
When I traveled at other countries. I surprised so many people can speak English. Even they are all foreign tongue.
>> Whenever I travelled to other countries people are surprised that I can speak English even though that they are English speaker they\'re still surprised that I can speak English.
I make myself a promise “I will speak in English fluent and I want to travel around the world”
>> I promise to myself that \" I will speak in English fluently and I will travel around the world\".
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