Sentimental value
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No, I don\'t think sides sentimental value about things because I can\'t keep something for a long time.
I envy peoplewho habe that kind of sensibility.
I just pile u[ these things here and there and throw away after all this time.
Fortunately, I think I don\'t have much such things.
I forgot my wddding rings that my husbnd given when we were married.
Mor seriously, I don\'t even know when I forgot, hohoho.
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No, I don\'t think sides sentimental value about things because I can\'t keep something for a long time.
>>> No, I don\'t have any sentimental value on things because I can\'t keep something for a long time.
I envy people who habe that kind of sensibility.
I envy people who habe that kind of sensibility.
>>> I envy those people who have that kind of sensibilty.
I just pile u[ these things here and there and throw away after all this time.
I just pile u[ these things here and there and throw away after all this time.
>>> I just pile up these things anywhere and then throw it away after quite sometime.
Fortunately, I think I don\'t have much such things.
Fortunately, I think I don\'t have much such things.
>>> CORRECT
OR Luckily, I don\'t have much things that I keep.
I forgot my wddding rings that my husbnd given when we were married.
I forgot my wddding rings that my husbnd given when we were married.
>>> I forgot my wedding ring that my husband gave me when we were married.
>>> I forgot the wedding ring that my husband had given me when we were married.
Mor seriously, I don\'t even know when I forgot, hohoho.
Mor seriously, I don\'t even know when I forgot, hohoho.
>>> More seriously, I don\'t even know when did I forget.
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