Seodaemun prison
학생이 쓴 원문
I went to Seodaemun prison.
From 1910 to 1945, Korea was a colony of Japan.
Japanese had treated Koreans in a bad way because many koreans wanted to be seperated from Japan.
Many freedom fighters such as Yoo-Gwan Soon, Yoon Bong Gil had died. Yoo-Gwan Soon and Son Byeong Heui had died in Seodaemun prison.
They tortured freedom fighters by poking inside the skin of our nails, put them in a box of nails and kick the box while the freedom fighter was inside and even make them stay at a coffub which size is about a man can go in and fit!!!
I experienced the coffin torture. I couldn't almost move!! I can't sit or turn my body over. I can hardly scratch my legs..
I hope the freedom fighters will go to Heaven...
Those Japanese people are insane so they treated us in a inhumane
강사 첨삭
Hello Joey,
It's a sad story to hear. At least these people fought for something they believed in, and the didn't die in vain. Talk to you tomorrow.
-RJ
I went to Seodaemun prison.>>correct
From 1910 to 1945, Korea was a colony of Japan.
From 1910 to 1945, Korea was a colony of Japan.
>>correct
Japanese had treated Koreans in a bad way because many koreans wanted to be seperated from Japan.
Japanese had treated Koreans in a bad way because many koreans wanted to be seperated from Japan.
>>The Japanese had treated Koreans in a bad way because many Koreans wanted to be separated from Japan.
Many freedom fighters such as Yoo-Gwan Soon, Yoon Bong Gil had died. Yoo-Gwan Soon and Son Byeong Heui had died in Seodaemun prison.
Many freedom fighters such as Yoo-Gwan Soon, Yoon Bong Gil had died. Yoo-Gwan Soon and Son Byeong Heui had died in Seodaemun prison.
>>Many freedom fighters such as Yoo-Gwan Soon, Yoon Bong Gil were killed. Yoo-Gwan Soon and Son Byeong Heui had died in Seodaemun prison.
They tortured freedom fighters by poking inside the skin of our nails, put them in a box of nails and kick the box while the freedom fighter was inside and even make them stay at a coffub which size is about a man can go in and fit!!!
They tortured freedom fighters by poking inside the skin of our nails, put them in a box of nails and kick the box while the freedom fighter was inside and even make them stay at a coffub which size is about a man can go in and fit!!!
>>They tortured the freedom fighters by poking inside the skin of their nails, and putting them in a box of nails and kicking the box while the freedom fighter was inside and even make them stay at a coffin which a man can't fit in!
I experienced the coffin torture. I couldn't almost move!! I can't sit or turn my body over. I can hardly scratch my legs..
I experienced the coffin torture. I couldn't almost move!! I can't sit or turn my body over. I can hardly scratch my legs..
>>I experienced the coffin torture. I couldn't almost move!! I couldn't sit or turn my body over. I could hardly scratch my legs..
I hope the freedom fighters will go to Heaven...
>>correct
Those Japanese people are insane so they treated us in a inhumane
I hope the freedom fighters will go to Heaven...
>>correct
Those Japanese people are insane so they treated us in a inhumane
>>Those Japanese were insane so they treated us in an inhumane way.
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