Seollal
학생이 쓴 원문
In the morning, we have rice cakes soup after performing a memorial service to our ancestors. Eating rice cake soup is a symbol of getting a year older. we exchange deep bows with each other,giving words of blessing. The elderly usually give some money, which
means lucky money, to their children or juniors .
강사 첨삭
Hello, Gi [이름]!
It’s nice to learn about different traditions during Seollal. I’m just wondering about the rice cake soup because, from what I know, the former president removed the concept of Korean age. Does that take away its meaning? Let’s discuss this in our class on Monday.
- T. Caitlyn
In the morning, we have rice cakes soup after performing a memorial service to our ancestors.
>> CORRECT
Eating rice cake soup is a symbol of getting a year older.
>> CORRECT
we exchange deep bows with each other,giving words of blessing.
>> CORRECT
The elderly usually give some money, which means lucky money, to their children or juniors.
>> The elderly usually give some money, known as \'lucky money,\' to their children or juniors.
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