seollal and chuseok
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Hi Vance? I\'m Chloe. I\'m going to tell you about our Korean festivals and feasts first we have seollal in seollal we wear hanbok and do new year\'s bow foreign country it call korean new years day and second we have chuseok in choseok we made songpyeon and eat jeon that is our festivals and feasts.
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Hi Vance? I\'m Chloe.
I\'m going to tell you about our Korean festivals and feasts
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First we have seollal in seollal we wear hanbok and do new year\'s bow foreign country it call korean new years day.
>>First we have seollal, in seollal we wear hanbok and we do a new year\'s bow. In foreign countries they call it Korean new years day.
Second we have chuseok in choseok we made songpyeon and eat jeon that is our festivals and feasts.
>>Second we have Chuseok. In Choseok we make songpyeon and eat jeon in our festivals and feasts.
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