seolleongtang, stock soup of bone and stew meat
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Today, my grandmother visited our house because she was able to go to seoul Asan hospital. Seoul Asan hospital is next to our house. She bought me and my mom seolleongtang, which is stock soup of bone and stew meat. My younger sister wasn't there because she went to english academy. So we packed my younger sister's one. Seolleongtang tasted so great!! It's very delicious. My grandmother didn't had time to stay with us so she went to asan hospital. Surprisingly, We saw a public phone station and the glass surrounding the phone was broken into pieces!! I was quite shocked.
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Hello Joey,
Sounds really good. I like cooking Korean food myself. I try downloading some recipes off the Internet and try them at home. Yesterday, I tried making Budae Jigae (Army Stew) because it looked pretty easy. It turned out well. Talk to you again on Monday!
-RJ
Today, my grandmother visited our house because she was able to go to seoul Asan hospital.
>> Today, my grandmother visited our house because she went to the Seoul Asan hospital.
Seoul Asan hospital is next to our house. She bought me and my mom seolleongtang, which is stock soup of bone and stew meat.
>>Seoul Asan hospital is next to our house. She bought me and my mom seolleongtang, which is stock soup of bone and meat stew.
My younger sister wasn't there because she went to english academy.
>>My younger sister wasn't there because she went to the English academy.
So we packed my younger sister's one. Seolleongtang tasted so great!! It's very delicious.
>>So we packed my younger sister's soup. Seolleongtang tasted so great!! It's very delicious.
My grandmother didn't had time to stay with us so she went to asan hospital.
>>My grandmother didn't have time to stay with us so she went to Asan hospital.
Surprisingly, We saw a public phone station and the glass surrounding the phone was broken into pieces!! I was quite shocked.
>>correct
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