Seolnal, The Korean New year's Day

Seolnal is very special day in Korea. When it is Seolnal, We eat Tteokguk! Tteokguk is rice cake soup! And We become grow old after eat Tteokguk! We play with family! For example, Playing yut, Neolttwigi, etc Finally, Children get some handsel from parents, grandparents or relatives! But, Before we get some handsel, we are bowing to them! The Coolest Part of Lunar Handsel! and I hope our Tteokguk introduce over the world~^^

Hello Sarah dear!
Thanks for enlightening me about Seolnal. :p
Now I know why it\'s a very special holiday. :p
Even me would like this if I get to have handsels. :p
Anyway, congratulations again on your graduation. :p
Enjoy this day, okay?
Take care always, my dear.
I\'ll see you again on Friday.
~~T. Heidi _^-^_

Seolnal is very special day in Korea.
>>>Seolnal is a very special day in South Korea.
When it is Seolnal, We eat Tteokguk!
>>>When it is Seolnal, we eat Tteokguk!
>>>Or: During Seolnal, we eat Tteokguk!
 Tteokguk is rice cake soup!
>>>Correct!
And We become grow old after eat Tteokguk!
>>>And we become older after we eat Tteokguk!
>>>Or: And we become older after eating Tteokguk!
We play with family!
>>>Correct!
For example, Playing yut, Neolttwigi, etc
>>>For example, we play yut, Neolttwigi, etc.
Finally, Children get some handsel from parents, grandparents or relatives!
>>>Finally, the children get some handsel from parents, grandparents or relatives!
But, Before we get some handsel, we are bowing to them!
>>>But before we get the handsel, we have to bow to them!
The Coolest Part of Lunar Handsel!
>>>The coolest part of the Lunar New Year is handsel.
>>>Or: The best part of the Lunar New Year is getting handsels.
and I hope our Tteokguk introduce over the world~^^
>>>And I hope that our Tteokguk will be introduced all over the world. ^^
>>>Or: And I hope that our Tteokguk will be known world-wide.