seolnal-the korean traditional holiday
학생이 쓴 원문
i enjoyed Seolnal for about 4days and it was pretty happy.
but I'm little bit regretful. because i couldn't stduy at all.
As you know, I'm 12nd grade student so I should have studied even it was a holiday.
but I'm going to study hard from now on.
강사 첨삭
hey [이름],glad to hear that you are pursuing to study hard already, keep it up and don't be lazy,
you can always do it, I'm preety sure of that.^^
T.Joy
i enjoyed Seolnal for about 4days and it was pretty happy.>>>correctbut I'm little bit regretful. because i couldn't stduy at all.>>>But I'm a little bit regretful because I couldn't study at all.As you know, I'm 12nd grade student so I should have studied even it was a holiday.>>>>As you know,I'm a 12th grade student so I should have studied even if it was a holiday.but I'm going to study hard from now on. >>>correct
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