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Hello [이름],
I commend you for being active in class and I know that you are eager to learn new things. Nice job and enjoy learning!!!!
Have a great day!!!!
T. Jeny
Hi, teacher Jeny.
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Yesterday, I went to Seoul University Hospital with my husband.
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We took the Ktx it takes 3hours.
>>We took the KTX for 3 hours going to Seoul.
The results of the MRI examination of the hospital came out.
>>The results of the MRI examination from the hospital came out.
My son should have his brain MRI .
>>My son\'s brain should undergo MRI.
>>My son should have an MRI for his brain.
It`ll takeb after two years again.
>>It will last for 2 years.
>>He will do it again for another 2 years.
The size of the blood bump was the same before. it didn`t get bigger.
>>The size of the blood clot is the same so it didn\'t get bigger.
Forever, it size gets bigger he has to do surgery.
>>However, if it will get bigger he will have a surgery.
Afternoon, I met my friends. We had a nice didnner with my friends in Seoul.
>>I met my friends this afternoon and I had dinner with my friends in Seoul.
We came down midnight . We took the last KTX.
>>We took the last KTX trip in the midnight going back home.
Goodbye~~
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