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2019-02-15 · 첨삭 강사 Jeny

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Hi, teacher Jeny. Yesterday, I went to Seoul University Hospital with my husband. We took the Ktx it takes 3hours. The results of the MRI examination of the hospital came out. My son should have his brain MRI .It`ll takeb after two years again. The size of the blood bump was the same before. it didn`t get bigger. Forever, it size gets bigger he has to do surgery. Afternoon, I met my friends. We had a nice didnner with my friends in Seoul. We came down midnight . We took the last KTX. Goodbye~~

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름],

I commend you for being active in class and I know that you are eager to learn new things. Nice job and enjoy learning!!!!

Have a great day!!!!

T. Jeny


Hi, teacher Jeny.

>>correct
 Yesterday, I went to Seoul University Hospital with my husband.

>>correct
 We took the Ktx it takes 3hours.

>>We took the KTX for 3 hours going to Seoul.
 The results of the MRI examination of the hospital came out.

>>The results of the MRI examination from the hospital came out.
 My son should have his brain MRI .

>>My son\'s brain should undergo MRI.

>>My son should have an MRI for his brain.
It`ll takeb after two years again.

>>It will last for 2 years.

>>He will do it again for another 2 years.
 The size of the blood bump was the same before. it didn`t get bigger.

>>The size of the blood clot is the same so it didn\'t get bigger.
 Forever, it size gets bigger he has to do surgery.

>>However, if it will get bigger he will have a surgery.
 Afternoon, I met my friends. We had a nice didnner with my friends in Seoul.

>>I met my friends this afternoon and I had dinner with my friends in Seoul.
 We came down midnight . We took the last KTX.

>>We took the last KTX trip in the midnight going back home.
 Goodbye~~

>>correct

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