Sep 20th homework

2024-09-23 · 첨삭 강사 Ash

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In my holiday, the most memorable thing is swimming next to the Bondi Beach. That was my one of bucket lists. Contrary to my expectations, the water was freezing cold and dirty. I’m better after a little bit of patient. Second is eating Malatang in Chinese town. It’s a famous restaurant in Korea because of the delicious taste. I was happy because there were many ingredients that did not exist in Korea. Last is having dinner with friend at hotel. It was a time when we could talk seriously and communicate with each other over dinner.

강사 첨삭

Hi,

Thanks for sharing. I am glad you had a fantastic holiday!

-Teacher Ash

In my holiday, the most memorable thing is swimming next to the Bondi Beach.

>> During my holiday, the most memorable thing that ever happened was swimming in the Bondi beach.

That was my one of bucket lists.

>> That was one of my bucket lists.

Contrary to my expectations, the water was freezing cold and dirty.

>>CORRECT!

I’m better after a little bit of patient.

>> I’m better after a little bit of patience.

Second is eating Malatang in Chinese town.

>> Second is eating \"Malatang\" in China town.

It’s a famous restaurant in Korea because of the delicious taste.

>> CORRECT!

I was happy because there were many ingredients that did not exist in Korea.

>> I was happy because unlike the \"Malatang\" in Korea, there were many ingredients that were included.

Last is having dinner with friend at hotel.

>>Last is having dinner with a friend at a hotel.

It was a time when we could talk seriously and communicate with each other over dinner

>> CORRECT

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