Sep 22, 2015

1. What are some of the most important holidays in your country? A> Chusuck is known as the biggest holiday in Korea. But, I would like to say that we must remember our independent day (8/15) as a priority. 2. Which holiday are you most excited about? A> Chusuck and Seollal make me excited at most because they always provide long holiday. 3. How do Koreans observe Seollal? A> I would like to introduce a Korean tradition. Koreans make rice cake soup as known as dduckguck and we count that we grow a year older when eating off one bowl. 4. How was the traffic situation during the observance of Seollal? A> It is seriously crowded whenever Seollal is just around the corner. So, we can get time benefit when we shift visit period to avoid the most jammed time.

Hello James!   I like it that you explained your point by providing details. However you have to be concise. Conciseness refers to the economical use of words.  Concise writing involves the elimination of:  unnecessary words (redundancy/\"deadwood\"), roundabout expressions (wordiness), and needless repetition.  The objective is directness- expressing ideas in the most forthright way.  Teacher Venus^^   1. What are some of the most important holidays in your country?A> Chusuck is known as the biggest holiday in Korea. >>>CORRECT But, I would like to say that we must remember our independent day (8/15) as a priority. >>> But, I would like to say that we must remember our Independence Day (8/15) as a priority. 2. Which holiday are you most excited about?A> Chusuck and Seollal make me excited at most because they always provide long holiday. >>>Chusuck and Seollal make me excited at most because they always provide a long holiday. 3. How do Koreans observe Seollal?A> I would like to introduce a Korean tradition. >>>CORRECT Koreans make rice cake soup as known as dduckguck and we count that we grow a year older when eating off one bowl. >>>Koreans make rice cake soup as known as dduckguck and one gets one year older by eating a bowl of dduckguck . 4. How was the traffic situation during the observance of Seollal?A> It is seriously crowded whenever Seollal is just around the corner. >>>CORRECT So, we can get time benefit when we shift visit period to avoid the most jammed time. >>>So, we can save time when we avoid traveling in the rush hour.