Sep 23, 2015

Unfortunately, The Korea Times didn't present the questions today unlike in previous. So, I have just wrote my essay. The fact that holiday violence rises makes me feel surprised. It was difficult to find any person in the street during the holiday so that I thought almost people spent time at home. But, many people committed a crime out of their home. Maybe they did such robbing an empty house. Chuseok is just around the corner and the article lets me remind that we should lock the door.

Hello James!   I like reading your explanations. Some reminders: 1. Be familiar with the parts of speech and their functions. example: previous is an adjective so it needs a noun 2. so that vs so So means \"therefore\", and so that means \"in order that\". 3. Robbery vs Burglary Robbery is defined by the law as taking or trying to take something from someone that has value by utilizing intimidation, force or threat. In order for robbery to take place, a victim must be present. Burglary is defined by the law as the unlawful entry to a structure to commit theft or a felony. In order for burglary to take place, a victim does not have to be present.   Teacher Venus^^   Unfortunately, The Korea Times didn\'t present the questions today unlike in previous. >>>Unfortunately, The Korea Times didn\'t present the questions today unlike in the previous articles.   So, I have just wrote my essay. >>>So, I just have to write my essay. The fact that holiday violence rises makes me feel surprised. >>>The fact that holiday violence is on the rise makes me feel surprised.   It was difficult to find any person in the street during the holiday so that I thought almost people spent time at home. >>>It is difficult to find any person in the street during the holiday so I thought almost all people spend time at home.   But, many people committed a crime out of their home. >>>But, many people committed a crime.   Maybe they did such robbing an empty house. >>>Maybe they committed burglary. Chuseok is just around the corner and the article lets me remind that we should lock the door. >>>Chuseok is just around the corner and the article reminds me that I should lock my door.